Re: Tribes Gather 2

if you've read the previous chapters, and now have read the two new ones, you'll notice that i have revealed information about the Manushyas in the new chapters through the eyes of the characters themselves...no straightforward exposition...i think it works better...so thanks to all those who suggested it...

so far the story is going from three angles: Ruulin, Yitaku, and Manushya...

i'll write a third chapter, from the Manushya angle, and put up the three for critique...